Thursday, 5 February 2015

The Moon is Sinking Fast

Here's one product of the film found poem I mentioned here:




Each stanza is taken directly from the list, in order to preserve the natural narratives.
With movies being nothing more than stories, I thought it was interesting how each stanza seems to give birth to it's own sort of tiny story.  It's only a glimpse, but my mind tries to fill in the blanks of each line, to explain why a character would be saying these things.  I'm actually very fond of the result.


The Moon is Sinking Fast
 

They were off my path, so I never dared
Well, you’re going to have to decide
What’s more important, baby?
Well, this is inhuman—even for you

It’s not quite what I expected
Hey, don’t ask me about my life
I travel light, only the barest essentials
Come back

Are you paying attention?
His parents died last year
Hey, let me read that
You seriously don’t think I did this?

I love you.
Over here
That’d be the one
What are you doing here?

I’m lucky to have you
Stop the cars
It’s going to be okay
Come on, don’t talk about it

Is that a threat?
You seriously don’t think that qualifies you as a certified prodigy?
That wasn’t an accident
What makes you think they’re even from here?

We’ve got to present this properly
We are not dead
Are you recording?
Some advice about keeping secrets: it’s a lot easier if you don’t know them in the first place

Too much?
These children are starving
Her arms aren’t swinging—she’s carrying something
Put your arms behind your back

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for this...it gave me a great idea for a poem. Really enjoyed this.

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